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Why is it so hard to say?
It's only three simple words.
We both know I want to say them,
Maybe that's why it hurts.

Why is it so hard to show?
A single gesture would do.
You've seen the tempest roiling inside,
But you don't feel the same way too.

Why can't I be the one?
I'd trade the world to try.
Yet only I know the potential,
You think you know I'm not the guy.

Why can't I admit it?
Everyone knows it's true.
As much as you don't believe it,
"Grace, I love you."
This one is very personal. I would give the world for a girl who cannot see my potential... My friends call me crazy, and it may be true. If it is, I'm crazy for her.
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Yeah.. ik how u feel
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TheRealLulu Feb 21, 2012  Student Writer
Let me tell you something,
I was in a relationship for nearly a year and met a guy who quickly became my best friend. Then he fell inlove with me. And I to fell for him. I was engaged, and cheating. I ended up saying goodbye to my best friend thinking "How could he ever love me? There's nothing to this." A few months later I left the abusive relationship with the man who asked me to marry him. I ran right back to Jacob, my best friend. I would run away, and right back to him four times. This is my last chance with him. I never seen his potential until I thought it was to late. Give Grace some time. If it's ment to be, you'll hold her in your arms soon.
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Aznsiegler Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for that. :) It means more to me than my words can describe.
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TheRealLulu Feb 21, 2012  Student Writer
I'm glad :)
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CaptainDebitto Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're not crazy; you're in l-o-v-e~

I love this poem because I can relate to it. I have fallen head-over-heels for a guy, but he hardly pays me any mind. I've tried to pull away and avoid him, but I can't do it simply because my heart knows that I really do love him. I want to tell him that I love him, but I know he would reject me.

Of course, I can't offer any advice because I don't really know you, and the interwebs doesn't really help.
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Aznsiegler Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Perhaps not, but I may be able to help you! Try just telling him how you feel! :D I wouldn't use the L-word, for it scares away some people, but tell him you have a strong....desire? Lol Perhaps your vocabulary is wider than mine and you can find the words :)
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CaptainDebitto Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'd like to, but there's one problem standing in my way. I'm way younger than him (about a 9 year difference, I think). It's not unusual to date or marry someone with that kind of age gap in my family, but he is an adult. I am still a "child" so it would be illegal and wrong, I suppose. He's shown signs of feeling attracted towards me (but not anymore ever since the 14th due to a sort of "cry for help" letter I gave him). *sigh* I plan on waiting until my final high school years to "make my move" so to speak or wait until he acknowledges me again.
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Aznsiegler Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah, well, I wish you luck! C:
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CaptainDebitto Feb 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.
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